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 |  Subject: Loss by TrueTamer  Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:40 pm | |
| Loss
by TrueTamer
Why does victory feel like defeat?
Why is it that all that i hold dear comes falling down at once?
Thing after thing that i hold so close rebels against me.
Why all now?
I glance to the side, up, and down trying to spot what next will go wrong.
What crime have i committed to gain such punishment for so many things?
How must i atone lest i lose what i have left?
Yet now friends too are punished.
What shall be next?
I weep from the lose of paradise.
Perhaps time heals all wounds but now i am bleeding and time drags frozen and helpless.
What was my sin?
How to i fix it?
I cry to the sky begging for aid.
Yet it is silent.
And the suffering goes on. i wrote this in reaction to things happening in my life. I am not intrested other taking it. | |
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| | Subject: Awesome Sat Sep 15, 2012 12:03 pm | |
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| | Subject: Re: Loss by TrueTamer Sat Sep 15, 2012 12:23 pm | |
| thanks... i am glad you like it | |
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| | Subject: Re: Loss by TrueTamer Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:12 pm | |
| That was a really good poem... How long does it take to make one? |
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| | Subject: Re: Loss by TrueTamer Sat Sep 29, 2012 8:25 pm | |
| It really is good. Love your poems, Tamer | |
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| | Subject: Re: Loss by TrueTamer Sat Sep 29, 2012 9:00 pm | |
| it does not take me too long to make ones this size.. within 30 minitues for sure.. more like within 20.
and thanks for liking my poems. I have fun writing them. They are my therapy most times. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Loss by TrueTamer Sun Sep 30, 2012 1:29 pm | |
| Do you use a format when you write poems? |
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| | Subject: Re: Loss by TrueTamer Sun Sep 30, 2012 1:56 pm | |
| no i do freestyle. I just write them out in a paragraph usually without puncuation then fix it up with .s and cap letters then format it into what you see now. | |
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